A Magical Place
As I wandered through the extraordinary pond, the water delicately surrounded my feet. Underneath the surface the little fish poked at my toes as if they were trying to nibble them up for tea. In the distance I could see a pink flamingo wandering about the rocks. As night approached me the yellow sun turned into a black moon. I decided that I should head back. I calmly walked across the brightly lit up road and made my way back home. The smell of cottage pie welcomed me in. All night I dreamt about my magical adventure by the river.
Yasmin I really liked your story and all of the descriptive words you used.
ReplyDeleteI especially loved the part where you said "as if they were trying to nibble the up for tea." and also were you said "As night approached me the yellow sun turned into a black moon." and also were you said "The smell of cottage pie welcomed me in. All night I dreamt about my magical adventure by the river."
Basically I loved it all
Eliza
Thanks Elili!!!
DeleteYasmin I really liked your story and all of the descriptive words you used.
ReplyDeleteI especially loved the part where you said "as if they were trying to nibble the up for tea." and also were you said "As night approached me the yellow sun turned into a black moon." and also were you said "The smell of cottage pie welcomed me in. All night I dreamt about my magical adventure by the river."
Basically I loved it all
Eliza