Once there was a little girl named Olivia who was learning to cook. She was taught by her cook. One night when she was supposed to be in bed asleep she went downstairs to get another book to read, when she heard her parents shouting at the cook.
“You don’t need to teach our little girl to use a mitochondria-sized spatula. It is so small you can’t even see it.” Olivia could see her father's head move to look at her as she dashed back up to bed. In bed she was thinking but how can something so tiny exist❓
Maybe you should put your name and the week on for the title instead of " the girl who learned to cook " but otherwise I loved you story!!!
ReplyDeleteA really imaginative response to the question! The piece flows well, and your use of vocabulary is brilliant. Great use of grammar and punctuation (especially your use of the quotation marks). Keep up the good work!
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