Niamh walked into the room. She was where she had dreamed of being. All her life she had been home schooled and she hated it because her dad's old evil girlfriend had to home school her and her 5 other older brothers. Niamh walked out to the playground. As she skipped over she saw a big tree. It had white pointy things poking out of it. She walked over. A shiver went down her spine. As she went closer she realised the white things were fingers. She didn't know what to do. She had a mystery to solve this week.
Hey Meg
ReplyDeleteI love your story as it is such a cliff hanger. I think that you should do some adjoining story
Sophie T
Hi Meg
ReplyDeleteI liked how you ended your story plus you used very good descriptive words.