The Picture
Friday evening at 22 Jump Street, Eva and Lucy were in bed having a sleepover. Eventually they fell asleep, then this strange voice called that sounded like an angry Dad who’s head was about to explode. It started talking about a monster that was going to die if they didn’t help it. So they both got out of bed, ran down to a tree that had a hand sticking up from the bottom. They lassoed the fingers, pulled and then the monster came up with a gasp. After he thanked them he offered them a ride home on his back.
Hi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI loved your story. I have a star and a wish for you. My star is that your story was really descriptive and interesting. My wish is for next time try and put a simile or a metaphor.
Alice
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