Green, blue and white… all bobbing in a sea of blacknesses. Those three colours hold much.
Great, towering lumps, rocketing up through the sky, while turquoise glittering fabrics crash against pale pink shells and grasp them in again, some bits quite felicitous and then others chaotic and out of order.
So much in that unimportant ball of green blue and white. It even holds me! But how can something so tiny hold all of this?
I hold my pet hamster, who holds a single blade of grass, which holds the thing that creates all… Sorry! Wasn’t listening in biology again!
A really imaginative response to the question, a great piece of abstract writing. The words really flow, and I like your use of short punchy sentences. Great use of grammar and punctuation (especially your use of the rhetorical question). Keep up the good work!
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