Summer is a hot yellow sun shining onto the beach. But when her husband died, it turned to winter. But how can something so tiny change, and make such a huge difference? The pain in your gut hurts so much that you can't get the emotion out of you. He died on Sunday the 19th of March. What is the reason for his death? The next day she walked onto the footpath as sad as she could be sitting on a bench as she thinks about her eulogy as the day is coming. She thinks and thinks again.
A really imaginative response to the question, a great emotive piece of writing The words really flow and don't feel as if they are just stuck in for the sake of it. Great use of grammar and punctuation (especially your use of the rhetorical question). Keep up the good work!
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